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I’m back and I want to write again.

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Three years have passed since Twilight Sparkle became the official ruler of Equestria,

But now Twilight and her friends go on an adventure to visit the Crystal Empire for a nice, relaxing vacation, but even on a relaxing vacation drama can happen, Twilight hasn’t spoken with Cadance or her niece ever since Flurry was crowned, how will they react to seeing her again after all this time?


This is just a really sweet slice of life story, with nothing major happening.

The cover art is made by me.

This is an alternate universe story, if you don’t like it, I suggest you stay away!!!!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 5 )

Flash used his magic to open one of the big blue double doors.

Flash is a pegasus you know, he doesn't have magic. Also, Flash Sentry was last seen as one of Cadence's guards and who is he to tell Twilight that she can't take vacation? He is a lowly guard pony with zero power over anypony.

Also, Dash is not in a relationship with Soarin' so you might want to throw the AU tag on this. I'm not sure if it is officially canon or not but in "The Last Problem" it seemed as though Dash and AJ were an item.

Also, what happened to Shining Armor? Shouldn't he be ruling up there in the Crystal Empire too?

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Yes, thank you I forgot that.

I will maybe change it or maybe I will just leave it the way it is.

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Well it is your story so you do what you want. I write AUs rather frequently, stories with non-canon geography which is likely much more noticeable than the non-canon things you have.

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Yeah, I write a lot of non-canon stories.

That’s the reason most times the alternate universe tag is there.

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Also, what happened to Shining Armor? Shouldn't he be ruling up there in the Crystal Empire too?

That will be revealed, once Twilight and her friends come to the crystal empire in the next chapter.

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