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Wooden Wheel


Just an avid reader hoping to become a proper writer.

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In the midst of another conflict with the Changeling Queen, fighting over the next macguffin with the potential to change the fate of the entire world, Twilight decides to propose a challenge of sort to Chrysalis.

Twilight believes that it is possible for Chrysalis to have a normal life, a good life, one where she doesn't have to worry about the hunger that have cost her so much, all without needing to change (to much) who she is.

Chrysalis is, understandably, skeptical about that, but nevertheless she take the challenge, even if it's just to prove how wrong Twilight is.

But... would it be that bad if Twilight is right? After all, a good life, a life without hunger, does sounds nice. But is that what Chrysalis truly wants? Would she be okay with just that? How much would she be willing to change for a good life? And at what point would she had changed so much that she has stopped being herself and has become someone completely different? Would she even be herself at that moment?

These are the questions that Chrysalis will have to face to obtain her answer.

This story takes place before the beginning of Season 9

The cover art was done by me.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 12 )

Very interesting start. Chrysalis accepted Twilight deal maybe a bit to easily for my taste, I hope that her reasoning gets expanded on in the future.

The reformed changeling look never sit well with me, so I like the conditions set by Chrysalis.

Looking forward to more chapters.

This story takes place before the beginning of Season 9

due to the absence of the “alternate universe” tag, you get the feeling that before you even start reading the story you already know how it will end and the plot will go according to the canon, depriving Chrysalis of a happy ending

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And more chapters are on the way!

Thank you (thank you all) for reading, and I hope that you and everyone who gives my story a chance, enjoys it!

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I considered using that tag, but from the description of the tag itself, I think my story doesn't need it.

What does this mean? Well, you'll have to read the whole story to find out.

i am bit concern this story will she able to change or be like thorax cause those season 6 already ruined the original changeling i cannot allow them to ruined her look she is fine the way she is

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usually stories without this tag try very hard not to contradict the series and adapt to it. Therefore, whatever happens in these stories, the ending is most likely known in advance.
The first chapter seems a little intriguing (although the transition from violent confrontation to calm conversation seems a little faster than it should be.), but if the end of the story ends with Chrysalis alone in the forest discussing revenge plans with logs, then I will be disappointed.

Of course, in my opinion, everyone seems to have reconciled too quickly, but it’s still interesting to watch an agreement in which both parties do not trust each other.

Do you think Twilight's plan has legs to stand on and run, or is it destined to fall and fail?

Put an AU tag on this story and then we'll talk.

Do you think Twilight's plan has legs to stand on and run, or is it destined to fall and fail?

I actually doubt that voluntary emotions for Chrysalis will be enough to make her forget what hunger is. Everyone definitely doesn’t like her and someone’s words are not enough for this to turn into adoration.
In my opinion, Thorax succeeded in this in the Crystal Empire because this country literally lives because the artifact throws tons of love into the air.



I also completely agree with this opinion...
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Is this a confusion caused by the line "This story takes place before the beginning of Season 9" and what could its wording imply?

Because if this is the case, I apologize. My intention with this line was to set a time frame in which the story occurs and takes place, and at what point diverge from the canon, given the implicit events that the reader must be aware of that previously occurred and that, some, will be referenced in it.

With that said, I may contact a moderator in the future and ask for their opinion on the matter.

But right now, due to the exception rule in the Alternate Universe tag description, I don't think it applies to my story, regardless of how it develops and concludes.

Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoy the story from beginning to end.

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thanks for the detailed answer :)

The question is off topic. It turns out that in this story, events happened with the evil clones of mein six? Did Chrysalis save the purple log she talked to when she thought no one could see her?

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If everything goes well, 'splinter' and the changelogs will make a cameo in a future chapter.

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