This story is a sequel to Eyes So Dark
In an attempt to relieve her boredom as a prisoner, Rarity convinces Empress Andromeda to let her tag along on a trip to an abandoned town–a town Rarity will discover is a graveyard in more ways than one.
Takes place in an AU by Maximasmac. Artwork is also by Maxima.
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That was great, and you did really well portraying the horror of seeing Ponyville in its destroyed state, along with Rarity’s mix of boredom and being resolved to her fate yet still trying find ways to fight back.
With this development at the end, I have to imagine things will start to change in Andromeda’s mind.
Andromeda is in for a rough time I wager as dusty memories and emotions start trickling back into her mind/heart/soul. It certainly won't just click, but there will be confusion and turmoil as she's spent so long forgetting that these memories will be like that of a complete stranger. Andromeda if she still retains Twilight's need to know, won't take confusion lying down. It will likely infuriate her these odd thoughts and slivers and fragments of memories long forgotten.
And then there's the unknown rebels...
I wonder if this will lead her down the path of remembering or at least asking rarity to explain, and perhaps she will listen.
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It's written by the queen of RariTwi. This will end in RariTwi, and that means Twilight not "Andromeda".
Very atmospheric; it permeates throughout this story and largely provides the bulk of the narrative, even when words aren't being given. The only critique I would have is - as a sequel - this story feels somewhat unmoored. It feels like a transfer stage between a leading and subsequent story. I'm inclined to read those, based on this, but as a standalone it feels very isolated.
Read on the mono's site.
Fascinating au
amazing!
Rarity almost feels bad for her, Andromeda isn't Twilight, she's this thing that came into being because Twilight deleted herself, Andromeda is the mind that reformed in her place. Maybe she feels this way about the castle because she deep down knows Twilight was responsible for all this
Sweet jesus this is amazing. I can't wait for what's next. That is, if there is anyother story planned after this?
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I think this is suposed to be the 2nd in a trillogy.
I think I've read it first on mono site. Pretty good
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what AU is this... and where can I find More~?
So glad you've put up another part of this story I'd almost forgotten about the first, but now I'm gonna be keeping an eye out for the possible 3rd part of this AU
This story will be the death of me I swear/pos